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Old 08-20-2010, 07:15 AM   #1
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Question Work in progress

and can someone help me to continue this song?
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Old 08-20-2010, 07:25 AM   #2
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Old 08-20-2010, 07:52 AM   #3
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Old 09-25-2010, 10:07 PM   #4
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like your melody i rly think you could make this into an awesome song with more instruments :]
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Old 12-09-2010, 08:04 PM   #5
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Hey man just Re - found this thread! been looking everywhere to find it again! cuz i made more to this song!
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Old 12-10-2010, 08:46 AM   #6
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love your sound and bass and guitar , allthough it goes on way to long without anything changing , i suggest adding different layers over the progression that you have now , like a drum or lead guitar , would be really good imo. good luck !

here i made a little thing within it , just basic but to hopefully give you some ideas
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Old 07-30-2011, 05:38 PM   #7
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Sounds epic, like someone said, add some more instruments and keep working on it then i think it will sound great!
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Old 07-30-2011, 11:31 PM   #8
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You have a solid progression. In my opinion, I think that you ought to add more instruments or a melody line as the others have said. Another option is to start spicing up the progression and experimenting a bit, as well as adding some rhythmic variety. About half-way through I was hoping for something to change things up a bit.

So I'd say that above all else, you mostly just need to add a bit of variety.
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