09-30-2010, 03:12 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Netherlands
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Ride Forever Free [GP 5.2]
Here's a song ive been working on for the last few days , its a mellow/sad acoustic thingy.
The song is inspired by a show i saw on National Geographic the other night , its about a Warlock Biker President who got shot in his house by an Outlaw biker because the Warlocks were expanding to rapidly in Florida and was later found by his daughter in a pool of blood. on the funeral his family couldnt say goodbye to him because the cops used the funeral as a trap to bust the Warlocks who were coming to the funeral , and so the family had to leave before they could even say there final goodbye's , so this song is about the people who get caught up between the power for hunger , and get hurt by it. Anyway its written in Open G. C4C. Ride Forever Free
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My songs : The Holy Crusade Hold The Line The Age of War Ride Forever Free The Alamo Fading Away Glory and Honor In Flanders Fields Roma Victor Elation Last edited by MobiuZ : 09-18-2012 at 12:06 PM. |
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10-03-2010, 09:47 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Funky Town
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Not bad. Ive seen some of your other stuff before and i find it kinda cool that you use a clean guitar a lot. I gives your stuff a unique sound. Good job
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10-08-2010, 06:57 PM
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UG's Indigo River
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Mobile, Alabama
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Absolutely beautiful!
I love this song of yours! The chord progression is great and catchy. The main melody is catchy. I'm loving the bass outro. The drums are a little loud, not too loud. Not too much of a fan of the clean guitar sound, but it doesn't ruin the song at all. I'd give it a 9/10. I loved this song.  Thanks for the crit on my song.
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10-09-2010, 06:37 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2009
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1-4 Hmm i liked the intro, it was very catchy
4-8 i also liked the added synth The chorus is okay... it will probably sound alot better with vocals I liked the arrpegios going on in the 1st verse and the verse overall The pre-chorus is very plain but thats okay, it still is decent Chorus is same as above I really liked the break, it gave it some breathing room Verse is same as above The theme is AWSOME and my favorite part Verse, Pre-chorus, and chorus again I liked the outro, it gives it a very natural feel 7.5/10 very good song! C4C ? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1368804 Last edited by clanderson32 : 10-10-2010 at 10:38 AM. |
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09-18-2012, 12:06 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Netherlands
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My songs : The Holy Crusade Hold The Line The Age of War Ride Forever Free The Alamo Fading Away Glory and Honor In Flanders Fields Roma Victor Elation |
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09-18-2012, 01:06 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2009
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I actually remember this song from 2 years ago. It's pretty sweet, and I need to get a life
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