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Old 02-14-2011, 12:17 AM   #1
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Trying to get over you

My original song created 2 years ago..bout something regarding on trying to get over someone. Feel free to comment about it, i hope those comments will be constructive. Thanks!

ive made the melody with a guitar too. here it is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zSMQcib2h0w

The lyric goes like this :

I don't know what's these feelings
A gamut of emotion gathers inside me
Is it the semi-love feeling
Or just the remaining of it


Lies within myself
Couldn't define it
Need an S.O.S

Maybe I just don't wanna admit it
Feeling scared that I may have succumbed
To the soul that says I'm over you
But actually I don't think I am
I fight the voices in my heart
I try to be rigid and not to fall
I am heartaching

And now I have to keep this in mind
That I have to let you go
Now I know that I can't say
I want you back


'Cause I cant help it
It should be over
But everything is awkward
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Old 02-14-2011, 03:45 PM   #2
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reads more like a depressed opening of the floodgates than a song to me. if it's just for you thats cool but I'd have a hard time doing this in front of people. its pure emotion. it's very literal

edit: just notice that its from two years ago. makes sense now. that is all.

Last edited by rebelmidget : 02-14-2011 at 03:47 PM.
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Old 02-15-2011, 12:09 PM   #3
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i have to agree with rebelmidget. but then again EMOTION is what makes a show good.
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