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Old 06-08-2011, 03:09 PM   #1
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Easycore/Pop-punk. Unfinished.

This is one my song that i cannot finish. To be honest i can't finished any of them
But i think now I have to learn how to complete my creations.So i want you guys to help me I looking for some critic (who knows maybe this is a musical garbage),some tips or advices how to make it better.
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Old 06-08-2011, 03:35 PM   #2
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Not much to say other than it's pretty painfully generic. Lay off the I V vi IV, man, it's so boring.
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Old 06-08-2011, 10:25 PM   #3
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Yeah ridiculously generic, if thats what your going for move it a string higher. If thats not what your going for throw in some different types of chords. Maybe some 7's or 9's. Throw some blue in there too. C4C http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1449848
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Old 06-09-2011, 06:00 AM   #4
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Well this is pop punk.It shouldn't be so complex

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Old 06-09-2011, 09:45 AM   #5
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That doesn't mean it should be boring.
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Old 06-09-2011, 01:10 PM   #6
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Not sure how to do it more interesting but i'll try
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Old 06-09-2011, 02:41 PM   #7
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Not sure how to do it more interesting but i'll try


when you do chords on the A and D strings instead of the standard straight power chords do some thing like
D|9 11 9 11 9
A|7 7 7 7 7

Its kinda hard to make tabs on here
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Old 06-13-2011, 11:58 AM   #8
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It is generic, but to me it sounded cool.
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Old 06-14-2011, 08:00 PM   #9
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I liked the intro riff, but after that, there's very little variation or anything to add interest. Try riffs that aren't straight eighth notes, and work on your drum track. Also, in the verse, at bar 16, it sounds awkward to have the bass at 5th fret on the E; move it to 5th on the A.

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