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Old 08-04-2011, 08:39 AM   #1
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Lightbulb The usual genre - melodic metal (WIP) [GP5/4/Midi]

EDIT: This song just feels rushed and hammered together, so I will not continue on it. I will instead cut it to pieces and use it elsewhere.
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Old 08-04-2011, 08:52 AM   #2
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The first transition seems fine to me.
The second one seems like, you missed a bar out or something.
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Old 08-04-2011, 09:08 AM   #3
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If you mean bar 90, that's a part that has not yet been implemented into the song yet. I just needed somewhere to save it.
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Old 08-05-2011, 06:20 AM   #4
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The intro is melodic but eerie at the same time, really nice. Nice use of chromatism on the first solo. I like at how at 10, the first piano note clashes with the guitar chord. Also like the chromatism on the piano solo. Then the distorted guitar comes, with some mindless open string riffage, complemented with some odd time sig lead work. The second riff is more proggy, and it's pretty nice, awesome usage of odd time sigs, something to praise nowadays. Then the solo comes, ablsolutely great lead work. The next riff is pretty funny, but oddly it fits. The next piano section, the transition and the pretty piano part are pretty nice (pun not intended). Also, although not a part of the song yet, the 7/8 tapping part at the end is pretty sweet by itself.
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Old 08-05-2011, 06:59 AM   #5
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The first section of the song was amazing, one of the best things I've heard on here, please finish a song with that.
I had no interest in the middle "get your mead" section or whatever it was.
The piano bit at the end was lovely, you could definitely find a place for that somewhere. Would make a nice clean section in a song.
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