09-26-2011, 12:47 PM
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I Am
Join Date: Sep 2011
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Sofa King (ots)
Sleeper on decrepit throne
Hear thy name from pulpit call Choose to animate Or just to wait Forevermore Peasant in thy early grave 'Tis your choice to be a slave Choose to animate Or just to wait Perpetual |
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09-28-2011, 04:03 AM
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Ra
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Levantine wine country
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I really like this, it's a well balance between "concise" and "vague". It doesn't really seem like a full piece though, more like a small piece of writing in a notebook. Anyway, well done. 
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09-28-2011, 06:28 AM
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I Am
Join Date: Sep 2011
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i left THE out for flow, but you are right about it being about laziness. It was just something to kinda play around with while waiting for my brother to wake up. (he was sleeping on the couch lol) anyway thanks for the intput, i was beginning to think this was getting overlooked completely
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