link55588

Ive been sick but wanted to write a mando song for awhile so i did. My voice has been very weak since i have been coughing non stop for 6 days straight lol.

anywayy

http://soundcloud.com/chris-ferrante/juliette-mandolin

crit, comment, like, dislikes, you know the drill

and C4C as always

(ps the vocal track is a bit loud so mind your hearing)

KevinFreund

Okay I'm going to write this as I listen. The intro is a little long (in my opinion) You kinda have a country thing going with your vocals. The recording is clear. I think this could really benefit with some harmony vocal tracks. Your pitch is mostly good. Nice job man

c4c? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...76#post29815176

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BassTapp

Nice. Great vocals, it was very chill and easy to listen to, keep it up.

aaron aardvark

link,
The mandolin sounds pleasant overall. Vocals are occasionally a little pitchy, but otherwise pretty good. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1541979

link55588

Thanks guys, yes i know its a bit pitchy lol i actually dont have a voice right now from all the coughing so maybe ill re-record the vox when im not sick, but i shall check your out!

FrazerB6

i agree chop that intro in half (or at least make the second half have a slight variation on the first half of it), nice chord sequence but the vocal melody doesnt come across as well as the pitch issues kinda throw you, plus the melody kinda meanders and doesnt relate to the underlying chords as much as it could (But im not a singer so what do i know tbh lol)

You're onto something there though man.