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Old 08-11-2012, 02:30 PM   #1
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TBD Title (Power) Metal (C4C)

So I got around to finish - *cough* not really, still needs work *cough* - a new song. It's under the same banner as my other songs but I'm not too sure if you could really call it traditional power metal, so take it for what it's worth, I guess ^^

Disclaimer: I kinda totally cornered myself near the end of the song (around bar 144, leading up to the final solo), I need to rework that part a bit, sounds off. If anybody has a neat idea as to how to make it sound better: I'm open to suggestions :p (Same with the genre :s)
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Old 08-11-2012, 07:00 PM   #2
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Well, it most definitely is power metal, and some quite solid at that.
I didn't like the first solo though. You "stay" too long on the "wrong" notes (my musical vocabulary is quite limited ), like the bend in bar 105 in the first solo. When the synth strings play the chorus, the "wrong" notes feels very sour and misplaced (the E's).

Also the first break feels unnecessary, or at least it feels like you could do some more with it than just have the synths play a chord for eight bars. The second break is fine though, because it actually builds to something new.

The second solo also have some bends I'm not fond of. Especially bar 175.



Reminds me of Rhapsody.
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Old 08-12-2012, 09:20 AM   #3
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I didn't like the first solo though. You "stay" too long on the "wrong" notes (my musical vocabulary is quite limited ), like the bend in bar 105 in the first solo. When the synth strings play the chorus, the "wrong" notes feels very sour and misplaced (the E's).

I think they're called sore notes, not shure. I might give this a go later and correct a bunch of them lol.
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