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Old 09-05-2012, 04:47 PM   #1
Skytard
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Talking Insert Coin (A Pacman twist on love)

This is my first song I've submitted, please give constructive criticism. Kinda a fun twist on the typical "love" song. I'm still working on the music for it. I'm one of those song writers, like Elton John for example, that finds it easier to write lyrics and then put music to it so I want to get the lyrics finished. Please comment!

Have you ever met Ďthe oneí?
The one for you.
Would you know if you did?
Would you see it through?

You say ĎI donít feel the sameí
What if you lied?
Could you be hiding the truth?
Trying to hide
Whatís really inside.

Is this a game worth playing?

Iíll chase you until Iím blue
When tables turn, Iíll run from you
You want me when Iím vulnerable
Run when Iím unstoppable
Was this a game worth playing?
Or do you want to play again?

Do you wanna be my girl?
A simple Yes or No
Mrs PacMan on my throne,
Or just another ghost?

Let's play this game..

Iíll chase you until Iím blue
When tables turn, Iíll run from you
You want me when Iím vulnerable
Run when Iím unstoppable
Was this a game worth playing?
Or do you want to play again?

I lose, but Iíll play again
Insert coin and

Iíll chase you until Iím blue
When tables turn, Iíll run from you
You want me when Iím vulnerable
Run when Iím unstoppable
Was this a game worth playing?
Or do you want to play again?

Youíre out of lives, the game is over, we could play again but youíre out of tries.
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