Greendaz

A song about Gods...


http://snd.sc/PrdoEl

Heliotrope

Oh my god!(pun intended). Very basic chord progression, but i guess it works... Lyrics are awful and corny. And i would recommend singing lessons. Your voice might have potential but you need practise. But the quality of the recording is good!

Michael87

Your song has some potential, but like Heliotrope wrote it needs some work. The very first thing you have to improve is your singing, sound of your voice is nice, but technique is pretty bad and at some places it seemed like the guitar is out of tune a bit. As for the mix, the guitar could be louder and there's no bass. You should record it or compose it in some program, because it affects the song. Although there's some Nirvana/Offspring vibe in your song, which is nice, cause I like these bands.

Cheers and if you have some time you can check my song
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1554440

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Greendaz

Thanx guys for your comments.

Heliotrope lyrics are awful? OK, there are simple and perhaps corny...

Michael87 you're right for the most things... I didn't add bass this time, it kinda covered my quitar. This needs work. My voice sucks, especially when I don't shout.

Comments help a lot, thanx. I'll check out your work, too.

Greendaz

I commented you as well.

Heliotrope

Would you comment one of my demos too? It would be most appreciated...