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Old 09-10-2012, 03:59 PM   #1
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Urgent Lyric Help Needed!!

Okay I've just started the second verse of a song I am writing about the inevitability of change, and I've got a bit stuck on a metaphor I'm trying to create. It's in rhyming format in binary (AABB). It would preferably be three syllables long to end the line and half rhymes would be fine. Here check it out:

Listen to the wind
It cries...............

I'm trying to depict some kind of situation where the wind changes with the weather as a symbol for change. Sorry for being so specific but I would really appreciate it if you could help.


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Old 09-10-2012, 04:14 PM   #2
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I would say cut out the "it cries" and do:

"Listen to the wind,
feel it's new direction"
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Old 09-11-2012, 12:27 PM   #3
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