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Old 09-13-2012, 02:53 PM   #1
roadhouse2016
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Can i live my life

Can i live my life?

Its a simple question,
which requires a simple answer,
not a but, and or if,
just gimme a freaking yes sir.

i wanna see it fly,
just need to live my,

life like i wanna
live like need to find
someone else
who would like to
live on the outside
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Old 09-13-2012, 04:37 PM   #2
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I like it. I think though, that you could use the "Live like I wanna" verse as a chorus, with the two line bit as a prechorus and the other paragraph as a basis for a verse, It could be a really good acoustic song
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