09-18-2012, 09:58 AM
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left & leaving
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Aberrations
and if i never get better
it's just as well each word you speak is hell colorless cheeks ribboned lapels the tale the tape hiss tells. you are a defeated smile hanging just below the eyes; i am the off-chance anybody notices it is in this small room shoveling twenty years of snow you and i will come to know the nothing that is coming. it is in this wounded bird of a heart i will finally apologize but it will sound far too much like goodbye. |
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09-18-2012, 12:49 PM
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Use Your Imagination
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Marion, Indiana
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nice man, simple but good. my only issue is that the first verse just seems to have almost a little too much rhyming. but other then that its good
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09-18-2012, 02:32 PM
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mon titre d'utilisateur
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: In the bucket at the end of time.
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Please never stop posting. Thanks.
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いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー じーんせいはっわんつー！ぱんち・・・ "Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching |
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