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Old 11-04-2012, 01:20 AM   #1
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Somekind of metalcore song, comment please...

Another song by me, kinda metalcore-ish song. I write this after listening to some trivium and anterior.

As usual, comments, critics and advice are welcome...

please enjoy the song, and thanks!
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Old 11-04-2012, 04:33 AM   #2
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Even though, I am not a big fan of metalcore genre, I liked this. Verse's riff is simply astonishing imo. And the final solo has done with feeling. And song keeps itself together. Well done, mate.
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Old 11-04-2012, 07:55 AM   #3
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Crit while listening. Ok got to say that I dislike metalcore and it's genericness. I hope there are no breakdowns..

Intro 1 - Yeah as I excepted, too happy for my taste. nice triplets on bar 8.
Intro 2 - Sounds very generic, but yeah it probably works.

First verse - Oh this was nice. I liked feeling on this riff, can get in to heavy mood with vocals. (I still hate metalcore vocals most of time xDD)

Interlude - yeah nothing to say about this. already?

First solo - ok this was cool solo no problem.

Verse riff the same, still can't uderstand why first solo came so early.

Chorus - generic memoreable or whatever called metalcore chorus nothing bad to say about it

Section 2 - this sounds like cool. I'm excepting alot.

Transition was cool

Section 3 was generic

First guitar solo was better than this one.

Verse again, not bad.

Bridge, nothing comes into my mind about this.

Last chorus and end. Good job pal. U got solid metalcore song here.
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Old 11-04-2012, 11:57 AM   #4
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that was a good song, if you can play it too, even better
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Old 11-04-2012, 06:59 PM   #5
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Crit while listening. Ok got to say that I dislike metalcore and it's genericness. I hope there are no breakdowns..

Intro 1 - Yeah as I excepted, too happy for my taste. nice triplets on bar 8.
Intro 2 - Sounds very generic, but yeah it probably works.

First verse - Oh this was nice. I liked feeling on this riff, can get in to heavy mood with vocals. (I still hate metalcore vocals most of time xDD)

Interlude - yeah nothing to say about this. already?

First solo - ok this was cool solo no problem.

Verse riff the same, still can't uderstand why first solo came so early.

Chorus - generic memoreable or whatever called metalcore chorus nothing bad to say about it

Section 2 - this sounds like cool. I'm excepting alot.

Transition was cool

Section 3 was generic

First guitar solo was better than this one.

Verse again, not bad.

Bridge, nothing comes into my mind about this.

Last chorus and end. Good job pal. U got solid metalcore song here.


Thanks for the detailed critics! Just wanna ask, what do u mean by generic in some of my song part?
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Old 11-04-2012, 07:18 PM   #6
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Thanks for the detailed critics! Just wanna ask, what do u mean by generic in some of my song part?

Generic as in "standard" as in everyone does it and its overused.
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