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Old 09-21-2012, 01:51 PM   #1
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My Song

Apathy is bliss Miss
Give me a kiss
Or not, I'm out dated
Not rated anymore
I'm a freaking
Dinosaur; Well like
Just like the escourt said to the client after money was paid and, phone calls were made;

"Let's get started."

Love is just
Lust that's a
This possession
Is unjust
Tell me
Who you can trust
In a world where
Your weed is just dust
I'm not saying it's tough
Or that I've had enough
Just, what the fuzz is it
all about?
Originally Posted by laid-to-waste
look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
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Old 09-23-2012, 05:06 AM   #2
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Forget your oh-so-clever small-line wordplay. Right this out, using the language of the piece, as standard sentences with standard punctuation and let me know if it makes sense. After you do that, we'll see.

- Pete
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Old 09-24-2012, 07:35 AM   #3
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I read out your song and i found that the lyrics are nice and the language is also in interesting but i want to hear the music of this song if you also composed the music of these lyrics so plz post the link of the song where i can listen this song ... thanks in advance
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