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Old 10-02-2012, 06:25 PM   #1
TheAscendant
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Edwardo

Hey! Just a few lyrics I've been sitting on. Let me know what you think and I will happily critique yours too(:

Edwardo


You make me feel as if
I know myself to well,
And I don't know if you can tell,

You left me standing there,
Before your chair,
With my head full of holes,

And I regress,
I've been left awake,
Into open space,
I fall away,

Aggravate my symptoms
'Caus it's okay to die alone,
These pastel clones make me
feel right at home,

The writings on the wall
for all your eyes to see,
In the changing of seasons
colour runs from the leaves,

And I regress,
I've been left awake,
Into open space,
I fall away,

Cheers,
TheAscendant
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