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Old 10-03-2012, 11:35 AM   #1
BrandyCross
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Holding On

so, it could be said that it's been a long time since I posted here, but I would love to know what you think about this one.

Sitting in this asylum I have come to call my home
I am broken I am bleeding, and I'm waiting on my own,
and I could cry for help, but I'm to busy holding on
and I could never bear to see, you left all alone

Whats the difference baby, if we make it past today
what's the change in life, if we don't find another way
and home is where the heart is,but mine's torn out on the floor
and we could never make our life just like it was before

you can't talk to me but you can talk to all your friends
then tell me we're forever because true love never ends
but a lonely heart soon turn into a broken heart that mends
and I'm still holding on to you, but maybe it's pretense

trapped inside the loneliness of a dream that just came true
sad to see reality, but that's not what it is to you
And I could never care for you, the way you want me to
Cause Im not your mother, boy, I've got better things to do

Whats the difference baby, if we make it past today
what's the change in life, if we don't find another way
and home is where the heart is,but mine's torn out on the floor
and we could never make our life just like it was before

_ Bridge_
You can't tell me not to cry, can't say it's alright
That what happens in the day will be different tonight
Can't tell me that you're sorry, didn't mean it that way
that what happens in the night will change in the day



Sitting in this asylum I have come to call my own,
I am broken, I am bleeding and I want to go home,
And I could cry for help, but I'm here all alone,
'cause I could never leave you, I'm still holding on

Would love crit, I don't mind looking at yours so long as you leave me a link or so in the comments,
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Old 10-25-2012, 07:42 PM   #2
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Chorus lyrics are great!
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