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Old 10-06-2012, 03:39 PM   #1
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Location: Preston, UK
The Place That All The Rain Goes To

Here I sit in silence,
In the place that all the rain goes to.
I fiddle, pick at all the holes,
Praying that it all ends soon.

I can't go out, here I remain,
In the place that all the rain goes to.
Compounded by these sunken walls.
I need to get out soon.

I'm going mad just being here,
In the place that all the rain goes to.
Lobotomize me please,
This god damned rain will be my doom.

(It rains alot in Preston)
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Old 10-06-2012, 10:01 PM   #2
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I think this is really good, if I had one criticism it's that the last stanza is a bit crude.
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