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Old 09-30-2012, 03:04 PM   #1
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Choke, Rock / Metal

Now then folks - y'all OK?

Not sure if this is finished or not. I'll probably come back to it in a week or so and decide it's all a bunch of shite. For now though, here's my latest track. Make of it what you will. Would appreciate some feedback.

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oh shut up with that /mu/ bullshit. fidget house shouldn't even be a genre, why in the world would it deserve its own subgenres you twat

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Old 10-01-2012, 04:07 PM   #2
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The vocals are pretty good mixed, nice and clear and the delay effects are kinda cool. I like the vibe on the vocals, fits the music well but i think you should try to sing it more power, sounds a bit weak for this type of music. The guitar tone is good but i would use less reverb and maybe boost some higher freqs to give more clarity and nearness if that makes sense. The drums are kinda weak imo, need more punch and a lot more presence in kick and the snare would probably do well if you raised the dB a bit, sounds like u got a good snare there

Cool song but the vocals could be improved in some parts and the mixing needs improvement.

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Old 10-01-2012, 10:22 PM   #3
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i agree with the comments by the person above the vocal mixing and effects are really nice. i also liked the little guitar and vocal bits panning quickly at different parts of the song. i feel like the drums could be more upfront in the mix though, and the guitars seem sort of washed out, but i think a little added treble may help that. songwriting wise i thought it was a strong track the groove in the first part is great it reminds me a bit of black sabbath or led zeppelin, and i love the vocal melody at the "such a mother****er" part
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Old 10-02-2012, 12:31 AM   #4
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Sleepy_Head,
Good intro sound effects. I could picture Johnny Rotten/Lydon singing this for some reason. The vocals are good overall. I think the guitars sound good, good riffs. Though there is a slight muddiness to the mix when a lot is playing at once, perhaps too many effects or reverb on everything. For the first ~55 seconds, the audio quality is very good. The recording/song is quite good overall. Playing is tight. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1565363

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Old 10-04-2012, 03:22 PM   #5
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I've had another stab at mixing this: I'd be grateful if some of you lovely chaps & chapessess would give it another listen and let me know what you think. Hopefully I've sorted some of the guitar- & drum-related problems out.

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