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Old 10-04-2012, 12:19 AM   #1
greyeyedfire
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Flower



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Last edited by greyeyedfire : 10-04-2012 at 02:27 AM.
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Old 10-04-2012, 01:28 AM   #2
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403. Thatís an error.

Your client does not have permission to get URL /p0NQRZ11n64J4EL1mbng74tswS4Qbi5shr-PFiN0S5_PatW0XU-S5bYQ64zvZ_liUt-6ic5siOo from this server. (Client IP address: 137.216.85.205)

Forbidden Thatís all we know.


That's the error I got.
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Old 10-04-2012, 02:27 AM   #3
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Old 10-06-2012, 10:06 PM   #4
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Hey, you posted something !

Somehow, this didn't work for me. You always wrap things up quickly with simple thoughts, but this was... too simple. It's just a feeling so common that doesn't work if put on paper so bluntly.

Now what I wanted to know is the purpose of the flower. Is it a metaphor ? Maybe it symbolizes that you're just waiting to bloom in a sunny day or something. I don't know; I'm not very good at symbolisms ( and I'm not a fan of them either, especially in movies ). But could you tell what it means ? Because it does seem to have its purpose.

It's good to see you post, even though I was not a fan of this.
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Old 10-06-2012, 10:25 PM   #5
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I like it's simplicity. I think that being able to decipher and sum up your thoughts like that is wonderful skill.
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