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Old 10-08-2012, 04:41 PM   #1
danielthemaniel
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Flashing lights have paralyzed my brain
Made me happy, kept me sane
Flashing lights they gave me will to live
Built me up and drained me like a sieve

Mother dearest
Don't you worry, I
I just need to alone
Brother, sister,
Can't remember, I
I just want to be alone

Flashing lights have tied me to the Earth
Woke me up and showed me all I'm worth
Flashing lights will one day shine again
I don't know how I will live 'til then

Mother dearest
Don't you worry, I
I just need to alone
Brother, sister,
Can't remember, I
I just want to be alone
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Old 10-08-2012, 05:00 PM   #2
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The similes were weak and exist only to act as a rhyme for the preceding/succeeding line. Third line "gave me a will..." Also, I have no idea what these flashing lights are, but they sound exotic. Maybe some clarification on what these lights are or what they represent could flesh out this song.
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