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Old 06-16-2012, 12:38 PM   #1
furtherfan21
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Garden Beds

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We used to fall asleep on the beach
and wander lost through foreign cities
That's where I want to be

I'm not lost any more
Well, not lost like before
That's alright as far as I'm concerned.
And I'm not really that concerned

You and I are aligned like the stars
I miss the nights we would drink until dawn
time passed by and those memories are gone

We're not lined up in a row
Not like the seeds we have sown
and we have reaped our rewards
that is our reward
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Old 06-16-2012, 01:21 PM   #2
JakePlaysGuitar
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Man this is beautiful. I can imagine this played at some fancy club or a coffee shop. It would be nice with a piano to it, but that's just my image. The lyrics are put together really nice, I would love to hear a recording of this!! I can't describe the lyrics really, they just sound so nice and professional, not a thing I would change!
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http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1545714
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Old 10-11-2012, 07:54 AM   #3
Zerina Chouvka
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Building raised garden beds can be dong using cement blocks of any shape or size, which provides good drainage for plants and vegetables. lol
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