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Old 10-11-2012, 04:29 AM   #1
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Far away, in my head.

I was feeling rather depressed, and was playing a riff on my guitar over and over and these lyrics kinda just came out.

Far Away,
In my head,
I wish you were here...
Far away,
In my head,
I wish you were near...

Should move on,
Can't move on,
I wish you could see...
When you're gone,
I'm all alone,
Wish you were with me...

Betray me once,
Hurt me again,
And keep me allured...
Destroy my world,
Come back for more,
My care is assured...

**** you.
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Old 10-13-2012, 01:09 AM   #2
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I actually loved what I read, which was the first verse, reminded me of Coma, by Guns N' Roses.

I assure you, you can't get a better song compliment, from me, than that.

Not necessarily the flow, more of the subject matter and language used, so, I'm not saying this sounds like Coma, but, reminds me of it, the whole piece.
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