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Old 10-11-2012, 02:04 AM   #1
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At the End.

I slept through the end of the world.
I heard there were fireworks, and thought of you.

Laughter is always so hard to discern
From crying amidst so much noise.

...And I'd like to think you were sharing the former.

But what do I know? I was dreaming.

I honestly don't know what this is, it literally came out in five seconds. Writing when you're tired.... Just tell me if I should trash it. Seriously, don't know what I'm thinking. I should go to bed.

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Old 10-12-2012, 02:00 AM   #2
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Dont trash it dude. If you do i'm never talking to you again. dont belittle it because it was written late or because you were tired. this is class writing and i want to see you put more into it. ill even challenge you right now i want you to finish this by monday and ill write something and we put it in the contests. you up?
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Old 10-12-2012, 05:48 AM   #3
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With some really emotional screamy sort of vocals, I think those lyrics would be perfect, also, your song In Parting is great.

They would probably work with cleaner vocals too, I don't know, they're definitely good though.

Great job, you know!
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Old 10-13-2012, 12:40 AM   #4
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This is really cool. I'd like to see this fully written
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