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Old 10-14-2012, 09:28 PM   #1
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[C4C] Short Electronic Clip

Wrote this last night, first time doing anything like it before. Synths are Vacuum and Xpand2 from Pro Tools 10, drums are Xpand2 as well as Steven Slate Drums.

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Old 10-15-2012, 04:59 PM   #2
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I think the bass needs to be compressed a little, or you could simply make it not fade in quite as far. It seems a bit too loud at the end. Otherwise, I liked this; it was simple, upbeat, and enjoyable to listen to. If you want to make the section starting around 0:56 sound a little fuller and more immersive, you could try adding in some subtle fade-ins of high-pitched notes.


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Old 10-17-2012, 07:22 PM   #3
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I definitely think 0:56 doesn't hit hard enough, I'll definitely have a play with that. Thanks for listening!
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Old 10-19-2012, 06:26 PM   #4
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The intro sounds all too familiar. Its rather generic in my opinion. The part at 1:19 was a nice change of pace for the song, at least the drumming was. The song overall was starting to pick up and become more interesting honestly. Tad disappointing for it to end so soon.

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Old 10-19-2012, 09:39 PM   #5
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A little heavy on the pumping compression for my taste (I know many people like that though), but otherwise it sounds very nice! Please review my electronic music at this link:

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Old 10-21-2012, 08:38 AM   #6
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This track is interesting to listen to, but it sounds a little bland and generic, like I've heard it all before. I like the production quality though, and the piano sounds really good throughout the whole song. It's definitely too short though. It just starts to get interesting, and then ends. Still a decent track though, good work.

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Old 10-23-2012, 08:37 PM   #7
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Thanks for listening, guys
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