10-20-2012, 11:58 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2012
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Song about my self
Just a little self assessment, if anyone is interested I could record it and post it. Its one of my writings I actually like, mostly because i just wrote it..
You You've got high hopes for a wonderful world You've got High hopes for the people there But c'mon What do you really think of them You put your soul in a wooden box You put your Heart another one too How could you Every feeling you've ever had You're feeling crazy and you want to shout You're feeling sad And you want to pout How about you Let it all out You hide your feelings from your deepest friends You hide your feelings and you like to pretend Do you really Think you'd lose them To yourself? |
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10-21-2012, 12:14 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2012
Location: Ontario, Canada
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I like it! It sounds like it could be a great acoustic piece.
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10-21-2012, 12:18 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2012
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Thanks, it probably will be acoustic. It's the best thing I've ever written in my opinion.
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10-21-2012, 02:08 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2010
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I like these lyrics, straight up and honest.
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10-21-2012, 04:50 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2012
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You know, when i read lyrics i'm always curious on what kind of track it is. i hope it is a acoustic song.
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10-21-2012, 11:32 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2012
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I wrote it on my acoustic and its hot a finger picked guitar solo of the chord progression so it definitely will be acoustic. Thanks for the feedback
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10-22-2012, 10:36 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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Great job i think a slow fingerstyle acoustic backing will set you up for some bigtine sucsess
Can you help me write stuff like this.......straightforward and honest? |
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10-23-2012, 05:56 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2012
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Uh we'll you sort of just right it out lol
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11-02-2012, 08:58 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: US
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Yes, record it with acoustic or harmonic accompaniment. Forum will listen to you
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11-10-2012, 01:20 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2012
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This is truly beautiful! i really wish i could hear it
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12-08-2012, 02:32 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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Hey, I came up with a way of converting tose lyrics into a hardcore/metal sound....Is it ok If i record myself doing this in my way? You have your ways and i can have mine.....noone is hurt....it is a new style that i am trying...Again...good song, but if i may please try this out in a way that i play on my own
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