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Old 11-04-2012, 05:33 PM   #1
pRockWbe
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Join Date: Nov 2012
right now, we are young

hey guys

1st post over here. Glad to be part of this great forums.
I'm from germany so keep calm while reading my bad tasting English-grammar-sentences

I wrote the first part of a song, topic is the life and it's duration...

"
As you know, life's too short
so let's use our chance to
move, to talk, to live, to sort
our feelings - matching?- let's do
things we ever wanted to:
Loving, travelling around the world?
Australia, Tasmania or India
There are so many places we
could visit

Right now, we are young
but there's and end
we'll reach someday
so let's spent
enough time living our dreams, bung
the hole of mistakes and go on

"

(...)

genre : like FM Static, The Script

Some idea how to continue?


Thank you!!!


yours
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