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Old 10-30-2012, 09:00 PM   #1
JimiJamesThe2nd
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Fulgur Urbem

incandescent luminary tombstone
stitched upon black and purple felted skyline
changing now to light brown and faded gray-greens
returning now to home and all those delicate home-things
quietly floating down I-35 in a coma or a day dream
A tailor traces softly along an unwritten seam
fingers pitched and poised for irreverent exchange of breathing
bracing now for Winter and a subtle deconstruction of my being
incandescent luminary tombstone
how glad I am that it's you that I've been seeing.
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Old 10-30-2012, 09:04 PM   #2
Flevi
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This makes me feel cold and damp, I read it like a rap song for some reason, I like it
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Old 11-02-2012, 02:59 AM   #3
JimiJamesThe2nd
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Thanks, Flev. Anything from anyone would be entirely welcomed, too. I don't write much anymore. I need to know how bad I've gotten.
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