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Old 11-06-2012, 01:49 AM   #1
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Poopy metalcore Gp5 (C4C)

some guy made a thread in Musician Talk about a chord asking what is was. It inspired me to make this. I wanna make the riff flow into the solo. That is why the empty spaces are there... Not sure how I'm gonna go about it though.
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Old 11-06-2012, 07:45 AM   #2
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Couldn't hear the poopy influences, but I really enjoyed the glitched intro, the guitar was verhhhy soothing
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Old 11-06-2012, 08:28 AM   #3
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Hi.

I really enjoyed the change into the heavy part, as well as the solo.

It's somewhat hard for me to judge whether or not the echoing screams at the start would be effective, as obviously they're not accurately represented here. However, the rhythm of that track seems to mesh well with your melodic clean guitar.

I don't have any criticism, really, other than that it is perhaps a bit generic (although I don't think the solo was bland or anything). I don't listen to much metalcore, so perhaps some of the subtleties of the genre are lost on me.

However, I think you've done a good job and made good note selections here.

The lyrics could use some work, though I assume they're just placeholders at this stage.

I also found the drums somewhat repetitive and lacking fills.

Overall, though, I enjoyed this.

C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1571658

Edit: I've uploaded the gp5 file now.

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Old 11-06-2012, 01:01 PM   #4
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not enough heartache
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Old 11-06-2012, 01:26 PM   #5
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at first i thought that the song is just like those electronica metalcore /post hardcore/ whatever is it. And when the solo start at bar 29, i was flattened....

for me, it just need to have the transition from the chugging part to the solo
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Old 11-06-2012, 02:27 PM   #6
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Maybe I'll add some more diminished and minor arpeggio/chords. I feel they best transcend the horrific nature of human existence.
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Old 11-06-2012, 02:31 PM   #7
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Maybe I'll add some more diminished and minor arpeggio/chords. I feel they best transcend the horrific nature of human existence.


I think he meant KSE ripping offness
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Old 11-06-2012, 02:32 PM   #8
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KsE are terrible and I'd say TS improved on them.
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Old 11-06-2012, 02:34 PM   #9
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Old 11-06-2012, 03:32 PM   #10
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I know, I'm out of funnies today
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Old 11-10-2012, 10:31 AM   #11
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for me, it just need to have the transition from the chugging part to the solo


+1

A few notes change could be made to way I ordered it now to make it flow better but that's the general idea which I think it is pretty sweet.
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Old 11-10-2012, 01:35 PM   #12
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A few notes change could be made to way I ordered it now to make it flow better but that's the general idea which I think it is pretty sweet.

That transition is still a bit too iffy. plus I don't really want to rephrase lines in the solo. good attempt though.
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Old 11-12-2012, 05:44 PM   #13
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Try this.

I just saw this now and uhh the guitars are in different keys...
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I just saw this now and uhh the guitars are in different keys...


They're both in D harmonic minor, dude. The scale diagrams are doing weird things with the capo, but they're in the same key. I'm not offended if you don't use it though.
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the rythm guitar while the solo goes on is just amazing, the match is perfect! I like the idea of a synth drum while the guitar plays the ''let ringed chord'' too. Nice job are you in a band or something ?
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