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Old 11-08-2012, 09:12 PM   #1
lububble17
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Ok so please don't laugh. If i heard this song on the radio i would turn it off, the lyrics are soo0 dumb and airheaded but here goes:

VERSE1
I feel like the only one in the world who isnít someone elseís girl
All these couples and Iím staring at the ground
Is there anyone out there waiting to be found

VERSE2
You caught my eye the other day
And I found that I could not look away
Shy glances as I pass you by
Did you look too? I donít even know,
It could be anything at all

CHORUS
So hey stranger
I donít even know the color of your eyes yet
Are they blue, green, or brown?
When you look my way, I look down
Oh hey stranger
Could you tell me your name please?
No I donít know you, but I know that Iíd like to.

VERSE 3
You got me day dreaminí boy
Whenever I see you, it brings me joy
Do I have it in me?
Or will I let this feeling just slip away,
These butterflies just kill me
Just saying ďhiĒ would make me sway

BRIDGE
And I know that life ainít a fairytale
Yeah I know that nothing is perfection
But I still hope that this will be the exception

CHORUS
So hey stranger
I donít even know the color of your eyes yet
Are they blue, green or brown?
When you look my way, I look down
Oh hey stranger
Could you tell me your name please?
No I donít know you, but I know that Iíd like to.
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Old 11-09-2012, 12:22 PM   #2
diseasedtrees
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I could see these as the lyrics to a catchy pop song! They aren't the most profound or creative lyrics ever but not all lyrics have to be. You should be proud of what you write even if it isn't mind blowing.

Keep writing and practicing!
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Old 11-09-2012, 11:27 PM   #3
lububble17
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Thank you for the advice !
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