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Old 11-11-2012, 11:47 PM   #1
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Nu Metal-type Song about a Bad Cop...

I came up with this verse for a song. The following was thought up by me, and if it exists already, it's a coincidence.

We're on a manhunt and you b***h is doomed
We have your a*s right where we want you
Get ready for a long and f**king painful ride
Cause you might manage to run but you sure as hell can't hide

Cause we're on a manhunt (nu na nah nunanuh nu na nuh)
Yeah we're on a manhunt (nu na nah nunanuh nu na nuh)

I got a nightstick in my left hand and a pistol in my right
I'm a mothef***ing cop and damn straight I bite
Try to run away from me and I'll shoot
'cause I'm a bad motherf***er who's out to get you

It's about a bad cop in charge of a manhunt or something and is very loosely based on GTA An Andreas.

I also came up with a riff to go with it

0--3--5--010--0--6--5
0--3--5--010--0--6--5
0--3--5--010--0--6--5

^ that is played on the bottom 3 strings of some kind of drop tuning, muted during the verse then open between.

Anyone have anything to say about it or something to add?
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Old 11-12-2012, 01:24 AM   #2
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Yeah.... that nu-metal was so inbred in the early 2000's that even if this song was terrible, you might've made it big.
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Old 11-12-2012, 01:45 AM   #3
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Anyone have anything to say about it or something to add?


Nu-Metal is like Santa. It's awesome when you're 10
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Old 11-12-2012, 01:48 AM   #4
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Old 11-12-2012, 03:14 AM   #5
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**** the haters! Let`s bring the nu-metal back!
Dude, add some more and send it to me
I`ve got some nu-metal lyrics on "my blogs" part of my page. Check it out!

Keep the nu-metal alive bro!
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Old 11-12-2012, 07:56 AM   #6
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Nu metal is metal combined with rap, right? You could growl the lyrics and it's metalcore, or add some record scratches and it's rap metal.

That's not my main genre, nu metal, but my thrash songs are less developed than this one.
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Old 11-12-2012, 09:44 AM   #7
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Old 11-12-2012, 11:20 AM   #8
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Nu metal is metal combined with rap, right? You could growl the lyrics and it's metalcore, or add some record scratches and it's rap metal.

That's not my main genre, nu metal, but my thrash songs are less developed than this one.


No please don`t mix growl into it! Not metalcore-ish growl. Or let him mix whatever he wants, nu-metal is after all a mix of genres.

The nu-metal I write and like are those with rapped verses and heavy refrains. And also weird bridges that could be really groovy or have this little stick that builds up and go into a last altered refrain.

Just listen to Stuck from Limp Bizkit and you`ll see what I mean
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Old 11-13-2012, 10:34 PM   #9
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Verse added
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Old 11-14-2012, 12:56 PM   #10
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Verse added

Great!
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Old 11-17-2012, 03:44 AM   #11
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Oh, great article! I will keep this post.Thank you for all the nice shares.
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Old 11-17-2012, 07:31 PM   #12
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Oh, great article! I will keep this post.Thank you for all the nice shares.


Hi spam guy.

I'm not sure what's so fun about posting thousands of messages for no reason...
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Old 11-17-2012, 07:55 PM   #13
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That dude or thing commented on one of my poems and then I saw it comment on other shit with the same thing. What`s up with the song by the way?
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Old 11-17-2012, 09:53 PM   #14
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What`s up with the song by the way?

I have other stuff on my mind than songwriting... also having trouble thinking up other verses.
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