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Old 11-13-2012, 12:05 PM   #1
Nardis
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Blue in Green

I wrote these to the melody of Miles Davis' "Blue in green". All feedback appreciated.

Rain pours down
upon the window
marring the melancholy view
i know
whispering a tune
of sorrow
for you I wallow
In seas
Of blues and greens
dream of the days of you
and me
but surely wake tomorrow
in all these
blues and greens
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Old 11-17-2012, 03:52 AM   #2
lillianyang
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great, agree with your idea!Thank you for all the nice shares.
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