Go Back   UG Community @ Ultimate-Guitar.Com > Music > Songwriting & Lyrics
User Name  

Old 11-09-2012, 03:49 PM   #1
Lost Pilot
jiminizzle's Avatar
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Coming Down, Cleveland Avenue
Upon Waking Up in the City She Used to Call Home

Still Life With Umbrella
after Jean Hélion

The widow doesn't believe
what she has become; nothing
was wrong. The arrangement of things
as if you'd never gone,

and her plans hang in the space
beneath the cieling, fill the vents
with the faintest shafts of light—

She hears footsteps now,
shoes stumbling down the hall
catches her breath as they near,

says your name to herself,
but he doesn't stop
and when a door that isn't her own
clicks shut she asks you
"Hello?" and though you don't reply,
looks at the mess you left behind
and doesn't feel alone—
Is that still life? Is that still life?
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
jiminizzle is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-09-2012, 04:48 PM   #2
Registered User
Join Date: Oct 2011
I feel like this has a more important meaning that I can understand, but I still think it's beautiful. Totally digging it.
leaving-blues is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-09-2012, 11:34 PM   #3
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2012
i LOVE the way you wrote this. It's half poetry/ half song. really nice
lububble17 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-11-2012, 09:55 PM   #4
Join Date: Nov 2012
This is a smoke great style poetry on.
angelxp is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-16-2012, 03:38 PM   #5
vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
vintage x metal's Avatar
Join Date: Sep 2006
lovely. your images are very clear. it could be longer, even.
Originally Posted by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist

e-married to
& alaskan_ninja

vintage x metal is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-17-2012, 03:22 AM   #6
Join Date: Oct 2012
Thanks for sharing,good article.I like it,I’m looking forward to read other articles.Awesome topic, like it!
lillianyang is offline   Reply With Quote

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump

All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:47 AM.

Forum Archives / About / TOS / Advertise with us / Customer Support / Ultimate-Guitar.Com © 2015
Powered by: vBulletin Version 3.0.9
Copyright ©2000 - 2015, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.