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Old 11-27-2012, 12:09 PM   #1
awesomo41894
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New original metal song (C4C)

This is one of my heavier songs ive written in the past few months. I think the riffs are pretty cool for the most part, I put a bit of work into the drums, although I THINK they could prolly be better. Im pretty proud of the solo in this, however, Idk if I like how I played the sweeps right be4 the solo. But regardless, I THINK it turned out pretty cool. Lemme know what u think. Any crit/advice would be appreciated! Thanks!

http://soundcloud.com/awesomo41894/...inal-metal-song

As always, Ill C4C.


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Old 11-27-2012, 12:53 PM   #2
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I really liked it, excellebt sound quality and heavy sound. In the beggining it sounds 90% similar to the first CD of the band "the sword", More like stoner metal. The solos are nice.

Good job overall 9/10 to my likings

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Old 11-27-2012, 03:13 PM   #3
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Awesome! You definatly have some cool chops. Nice breakdown aswell!
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Old 11-27-2012, 04:13 PM   #4
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Awesome stuff dude! Very stoner ish. Reminds me of the latest sleep albums and maybe some high on fire or even mastodon. Digging the guitar playing too. The drums cold have been a little less laidback, but hey, thats just me. Nice soloing. C4c? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1574537
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Old 11-27-2012, 10:47 PM   #5
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I really liked it, excellebt sound quality and heavy sound. In the beggining it sounds 90% similar to the first CD of the band "the sword", More like stoner metal. The solos are nice.

Good job overall 9/10 to my likings

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thanks man!!!
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Old 11-27-2012, 10:48 PM   #6
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Awesome stuff dude! Very stoner ish. Reminds me of the latest sleep albums and maybe some high on fire or even mastodon. Digging the guitar playing too. The drums cold have been a little less laidback, but hey, thats just me. Nice soloing. C4c? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1574537

Thanks man! I c4cd. And I agree with the drums, Im still learning how to write drums. Im thinking about buying an electric kit soon so i can learn faster.
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