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Old 11-18-2012, 04:40 PM   #1
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Let's Take a Chance

i wrote this song b/c of an experience w/ my gf, it's very emotional and means a lot to me so yeah...

i go to your house every afternoon
but i always have to go so soon
girl you know that i would love to stay
but your parents wanna keep me away
if only they weren't around
they wouldn't be there to keep us down
it would be just like the world was brand new
and we could do whatever we wanted to
woah o oh oh oh oh yeah

maybe baby we could be free
and i could touch you and baby you could touch me
and we could spend every night together
and we could hold each other tight forever
and maybe we could finally have our chance
to prove each other to our romance
let's do it baby, tonight let's take a chance

i've got a plan now, so here's the deal
just put a couple of these in their meal
then let me in through your window
we'll sneak in their room on our tiptoes
we'll turn the furniture upside down
and leave a bunch of empty bottles around
we'll be the ones to call the ambulance
and it'll look like an accident
woah o oh oh oh oh yeah
let's do it baby

then maybe baby we can be free
and i can touch you and baby you can touch me
and we can spend every night together
and we can hold each other tight forever
and maybe we can finally have our chance
to prove each other to our romance
let's do it baby, tonight let's take a chance

http://soundcloud.com/rockettemorto...s-take-a-chance
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Old 11-23-2012, 05:41 PM   #2
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i've got a plan now, so here's the deal
just put a couple of these in their meal
then let me in through your window
we'll sneak in their room on our tiptoes
we'll turn the furniture upside down
and leave a bunch of empty bottles around
we'll be the ones to call the ambulance
and it'll look like an accident
woah o oh oh oh oh yeah
let's do it baby



http://soundcloud.com/rockettemorto...s-take-a-chance


i'm not quite getting this part of the song. i'm not very good at following lyrics. care to break it down for me.

i listened to the song and really like the vocals in the verses but not so much the chorus. but i'm under the impression that you didn't spend to much time recording and you just wanted to give us an idea of what the song sounded like.

thanks for sharing.
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