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Sell the kids for food
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: On a hillside desolate
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I Will Follow You Into The Dark (aka my cover of an over-covered song)
Hey there, i'm looking for some pointers on my cover so I can improve it as i'll probably re-record it at some point (likely to be when I get my cast off). There are a few timing issues for sure, and maybe a few voice lessons are required but anything specific would be greatly appreciated!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP6weza5R-o&feature=plcp Please let me know what you think, I look forward to hearing from you ![]() |
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I try.
Join Date: Apr 2011
Location: New Delhi, India
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Really good job, dude. Yes, there are a few timing issues but unfortunately I can't point out anything else :P
I think you have a really good voice, and although I've never heard this song before, I really want to now ![]() |
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PSR
Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: Derby, UK
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Yeah, its cool.
Your voice is good pitch wise but sounds a little breathless and short. Just a few lessons with a singing coach could sort that. I prefer a more finger style strumming pattern on this song - there's a few lessons on Youtube that cover this. (might not be possible with the cast on?) or I like this version to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5o1whMYKRs0&feature=plcp and this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wRCP...&feature=fvwrel |
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Banned
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Sexy Presidential Palace.
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Nice one
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Registered User
Join Date: Jun 2009
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This is a really good cover, personally I would recommend lowering it a bit. You're hitting all the notes fine but as someone else said you sound a little out of breath. It might be that you're a bit out of your comfort zone. I really enjoyed this anyway!
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Sell the kids for food
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: On a hillside desolate
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This was particularly helpful, thanks I'm giving the finger-style a go, my cast isn't messing it up too much. Thanks for all the feedback guys! It has been most helpful so far. |
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Yes We Nyan!
Join Date: May 2011
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Sorry for the late reply!
I really like the lyrics in this I can't really say much about your singing because I know absolutely nothing about it myself haha. Mad props for playing with a cast too, that takes some really motivation haha My playing is crippled by a cut thumb or finger, so I can't imagine what a cast you do :P Hope that all works out soon for you!Nice song! I enjoyed it!
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