11-27-2012, 06:47 AM
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Dolor Aeternum ( Funeral Doom) C4C
well,it is one of my last works. i know it have a lot of problem with the transitions. I hope you can give me some advices, guys. it will be recorded for the new album of my one-man band project.Use the RSE )))
p.s. sorry for my english )))
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11-27-2012, 11:21 AM
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Very nice, smooth and majestic chord progressions, nicely complimenting guitar and bass lines. The second chord in the intro needs a little fleshing out, the melodic connection isn't quite there yet. The second verse is a better example of how it works. I can imagine this having a massive reverby production, but that'd work well with the song...
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11-27-2012, 03:58 PM
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Tbh, I had to increase the tempo to 120 just to listen to it. Wayyyy too long and drawn out for my ADD ass. But, when I did speed it up, I really enjoyed it. The melodic concepts are awesome. The slow nature of it is not for me, but you did a really good job man.
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11-27-2012, 05:33 PM
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thanx man. i hope the next time i'll do my wotk better than this time )) |
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11-27-2012, 05:36 PM
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this work it's really slow, but i tried to fill it with a lot of feelings . hope the other works will be better ))) |
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12-09-2012, 09:45 AM
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Oh, wow... Really majestic. Love the jazz-y and classical feel to the chord progressions. Would love to hear this recorded!
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12-10-2012, 07:02 AM
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I've updated the tab) can someone help me to write the soprano part?
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12-15-2012, 05:17 AM
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Where do you want the soprano part?
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12-15-2012, 07:27 AM
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well, i wish the soprano part at the verses 2 and 3 or at the interludes.can you help me? |
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