11-11-2012, 01:10 PM
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bblblubluewhale
Join Date: Jan 2007
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WotW : metamorphoo
oh,
all the big trees/ no snow no sleet no sleeves, that which accompanies the growth of me( bearded in wander. i sit, sometimes, other times walk/ eyes glass'd with another someones thought; limbs carrying me along, mind tired, lazy, dumb & gone. |
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11-12-2012, 03:38 AM
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yabba dabba doo
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: the living room
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this is really beautiful man. i think it reads better without "sleet no" but who am i to say?
good work
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there are more ways of experiencing the heavens and the earth than are dreamed of in your philosophy Last edited by Arthur Curry : 11-12-2012 at 03:39 AM. |
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11-12-2012, 06:17 PM
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DT's Feminist Mom
Join Date: Sep 2006
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ooh. and I like sleet.
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GOODBYE BLUE MONDAY
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11-23-2012, 01:04 AM
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That sort of thing...
Join Date: Feb 2005
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really dug it. you've got a nice Langston Hughes meets John Keats vibe going on. really wonderful to read and think about. happy thanksgiving, man!
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11-28-2012, 03:48 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: mexico city
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oops, forgot to stick this.
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12-01-2012, 10:18 PM
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bblblubluewhale
Join Date: Jan 2007
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thanks for this.
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12-02-2012, 04:49 AM
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Lets rent bikes from 1942
Join Date: May 2006
Location: In the deepest ocean, the bottom of the sea
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woah another ghost! hope you've been doing well. On topic, this is really nice. You're good with controlling sounds.
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Anatomy Anatomy Whale Blue Review Park that car
Drop that phone Sleep on the floor Dream about me |
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12-03-2012, 04:27 AM
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Banned
Join Date: Nov 2012
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my poetry review tumblr-submit poetry for publishing on the page. contact me if you'd like to help me with this.
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