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Old 12-02-2012, 09:31 PM   #1
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In Uncharted Corridors

Sleeping, while locked inside
Paralyzed in a far away current
Drifting, while
Gazing at storms
As they form, my axe
My way out

Screams resounds
I hear death below
The hallway turns
Distorted fields
Into red carvings on the wall
Light emanates out of the cracks
Ghost howls bounce
My guilt, now fate
My way out

Cornered in anxiety
This vortex ever pulling me
Ladders in front of me
Reaching, leaving
Uncharted territory
While descending the attic

I saw
Windows reflecting dawn
And life, sparkling beneath the stairs
Still hazed
I looked behind, for
Whatever massacre I did
I hoped
To never see again

Howls
I hear death below
The hallway turns
Distorted fields
Into red carvings on the wall
Light emanates out of the cracks
Screams resounds
My guilt, now fate
My way out

And it was bloodbath, all over again
They kept on, I fought on
In these corridors
I found myself crawling, looking for an out
Where my thoughts and memories
Once aligned in a cohesive path
Now drifting
Far away
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Old 12-02-2012, 11:19 PM   #2
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Pretty deep. I liked it. Reminds my of Walking Dead.
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Old 12-03-2012, 02:03 AM   #3
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Pretty deep. I liked it. Reminds me of Walking Dead.


Hah! TWD has been one of my favourite tv series lately. What a coincidence, I guess this text is a natural outcome of that, and the games i've been playing as well. And it never crossed my mind while I wrote this...oh well.

I take it as a compliment, thanks
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