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| add something "lighter" (clean guitars) after where i left off |
  
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1 | 20.00% |
| add something "lighter" (still distortion) after where i left off |
  
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1 | 20.00% |
| continue with the heavyness |
  
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3 | 60.00% |
| other direction (if so, please explain in comments) |
  
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1 | 20.00% |
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12-04-2012, 07:44 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2007
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Where should i go with this hard rock song? please help
i have about 2 minutes of song written and i cant for the life of me figure out where to take this song... id love some good ideas on a direction for this one. Please excuse the crappy fake sounding programed instruments i used to demo this... hopefully it still gets what im going for so far across. Thanks guys!
http://soundcloud.com/devin-m-clark...updated-work-in |
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12-05-2012, 12:48 PM
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Registered Riffer
Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: Just off FM 666 in S. TX, USA
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Cool. That song is going to sound good with some real, or real sounding, drums and bass on it. Love the sound of that riff in the 25 - 40 sec. area!
I know you didn't put C4C, but if you can, that would be great: My band's songs. Going to vote right now. Maybe some fast section added in there? Thanks. |
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12-31-2012, 12:25 PM
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www.garbelypublishing.com
Join Date: Jul 2008
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Man, that's incredible. Are you intending for it to have lyrics or just be instrumental? If just instrumental, you take the part that starts at 0:16 and put it at the end again, but elongate it and solo till your fingers bleed. Or put lyrics over it - I think that small snippet from 0:16 to about 0:21 has a lot of potential.
I could throw together a drum track for you in Guitar Pro if you wanted. If you get a chance, C4C: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...ferrerid=944455
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12-31-2012, 01:27 PM
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Muchacho Moderno
Join Date: Dec 2012
Location: Deep in the Heart of Texas
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Like the riff in the :30's.
Like the feel at 1:02. Nice harmonies in the 1:20's. Needs some vocals - obviously - Maybe a touch fast tempo, a slight drag at points. Revisit the break at 1:00 to make it a little longer (which part to revisit is often lyric driven) Would appreciate a listen to mine. Keep rockin'! DWS https://soundcloud.com/dances-with-...nd-of-the-funky |
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