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add something "lighter" (clean guitars) after where i left off 1 20.00%
add something "lighter" (still distortion) after where i left off 1 20.00%
continue with the heavyness 3 60.00%
other direction (if so, please explain in comments) 1 20.00%
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Old 12-04-2012, 07:44 PM   #1
metalcoremax87
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Where should i go with this hard rock song? please help

i have about 2 minutes of song written and i cant for the life of me figure out where to take this song... id love some good ideas on a direction for this one. Please excuse the crappy fake sounding programed instruments i used to demo this... hopefully it still gets what im going for so far across. Thanks guys!

http://soundcloud.com/devin-m-clark...updated-work-in
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Old 12-05-2012, 12:48 PM   #2
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Cool. That song is going to sound good with some real, or real sounding, drums and bass on it. Love the sound of that riff in the 25 - 40 sec. area!

I know you didn't put C4C, but if you can, that would be great:
My band's songs.

Going to vote right now. Maybe some fast section added in there?

Thanks.
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Old 12-31-2012, 12:25 PM   #3
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Man, that's incredible. Are you intending for it to have lyrics or just be instrumental? If just instrumental, you take the part that starts at 0:16 and put it at the end again, but elongate it and solo till your fingers bleed. Or put lyrics over it - I think that small snippet from 0:16 to about 0:21 has a lot of potential.

I could throw together a drum track for you in Guitar Pro if you wanted.

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Old 12-31-2012, 01:27 PM   #4
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Like the riff in the :30's.

Like the feel at 1:02.

Nice harmonies in the 1:20's.

Needs some vocals - obviously -

Maybe a touch fast tempo, a slight drag at points. Revisit the break at 1:00 to make it a little longer (which part to revisit is often lyric driven)

Would appreciate a listen to mine.

Keep rockin'!

DWS

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