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Old 12-04-2012, 10:17 PM   #1
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william carlos williams

I thought of a friend
(you can maybe guess who)
who I used to spend time with
when I wasn't with you
- I loved how he laughed
and how he'd get sad
and hold up my head
in his clammy hands -
and under my breath, the building hum
'I will make you come
I will make you come.'
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Old 12-05-2012, 10:14 PM   #2
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Somehow you always make the most simple, basic things seem deep, and rich and interesting. Your work is definitive proof that less is nearly always more.
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Old 12-10-2012, 12:26 PM   #3
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you are sweet.
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Old 12-10-2012, 01:17 PM   #4
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i meant to say something sooner
but i couldnt find words
your command of love poetry
is simply absurd
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Old 12-10-2012, 02:10 PM   #5
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i meant to say something sooner
but i couldnt find words
your command of love poetry
is simply absurd


This.

haha this poem was a great read. Thank you for posting it. I am trying to master love poetry and it helps to read such poems.
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Old 12-10-2012, 02:17 PM   #6
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lol Im that other guy so I really enjoyed this. Always fail at relationships but I make a damn good pool boy.

*this is ****in awesome. I just keep rereading. My glass is raised.

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Old 12-10-2012, 02:32 PM   #7
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shout out to the pool boy.
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Old 12-10-2012, 02:41 PM   #8
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Not proud. But not really ashamed either. They instigate it and I fulfill their needs. I consider myself an unsung hero.
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Old 12-10-2012, 02:45 PM   #9
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Not proud. But not really ashamed either. They instigate it and I fulfill their needs. I consider myself an unsung hero.


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