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Old 12-17-2012, 04:24 AM   #1
ArtVandelay
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In Autumn (Lips Turn Blue)

It's kinda hard to believe
Summer's almost over
Trees all losing their leaves
Yet I'm still alone girl

Heart grows so cold in autumn
Feeling heavy in my chest

It's weighing down my soul

Heart grows lonely in autumn
Feeling empty in my chest

Will there always be this hole?

Not looking forward to December
Air so cold our lips turn blue
I'll see you starting to shiver
And just wanna wrap my arms around you

Heart grows so cold in autumn
Feeling heavy in my chest

It's weighing down my soul

Heart grows lonely in autumn
Feeling empty in my chest

Will there always be this hole?

Heart grows angry in autumn
God knows I tried my best

So why am I still alone?

Will I always be alone?

Kinda hard to believe
Summer's almost over
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Old 01-03-2013, 07:03 PM   #2
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I love the way this is written! The title immediately drew me in and I like the way there is emotion, but it is not overpowering. Great inspiration
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Old 01-05-2013, 03:36 AM   #3
ArtVandelay
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I greatly appreciate that!

I was concerned it was too...obvious and overpowering.

I've been writing it as an acoustic song, in the style of the White Stripes' "We're Going To Be Friends"
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