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Old 12-15-2012, 05:02 PM   #1
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Progressive Metal (7 String) [WIP] .GP5

Hey guys, I decided to write a new song today. I am very stuck on what to do for the ending and what drums I should have in the intro. There is no bass as of right now, but I have some ideas on what I'd like to do. Thanks in advance.

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Old 12-15-2012, 05:18 PM   #2
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It looks like you slapped a bunch of riffs together. It still needs a bit of work put into it. Work on your transitions, also.
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Old 12-15-2012, 05:37 PM   #3
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Well, it has some good riffs, but it the transition between riff to riff is not smooth enough imo.
I quite enjoyed it from bar 9-32, first chorus kinda lost the groove it had.
I have a few ideas for bass lines for the intro, if you wish i can work on it a little and post it later.

This has potential though.

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