12-23-2012, 04:07 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2012
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Ambient Djent-ish "Litchfield, Az"
https://soundcloud.com/viola0shredd...er-section-with
not finished, might keep the djent section but if the rest of the song doesnt hit hard enough i might remove it and keep it soft. if the djent stays, volumes snare! whatcha think? |
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12-23-2012, 04:40 PM
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Pulling straws at random
Join Date: May 2008
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Should probably get rid of the click, rofl..
Melodically it was dull as ****. Sorry, just being blunt.. riffs are decent though, but its just too safe overall.
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12-25-2012, 12:27 PM
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I like taco
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Norway
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Try to make more variation in the song overall. It's really cliché and predictable which makes it uninteresting. The riffs sound nice so it's not that, but you have to make a way more different sound in the chorus, intro and verse so it doesn't sound boring.
And for god's sake, REMOVE THAT CLICK good luck, and I'd love to hear the results with some improvements. C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1579524 |
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