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Second song - Squeezing Chester
Verse 1:
With her head up in the sky She hides behind a face Made up to hide the lies Made up to hide the lies Fear has burned the mask to skin Now she's tethered to the ground Doused the twinkle in her eyes She doused the twinkle in her eyes Chorus: There's so much mind So much mind but you are afraid Shed their impositions Be free to your visions Shed your inhibitions I'll help you be free Open up your spirit Open up your soul There's no need to hide You're in touch on your own Verse 2: Individuality hides Whilst conformity thrives And she runs, cloaked Through the mist of her own making Clear the fog Clear the fog Deep down, she hides Clear the fog Clear the fog She wants to rise Pre-Chorus: She needs to rise Chorus Bridge: I've seen you And you're beautiful I've felt you And you're beautiful Our hearts touched It was beautiful I fell in love It was beautiful But I feared you And now you're gone You ran through my fingers Like misty smoke And I bask in my memory Forced into history Come back I beg of you Not to me Come back to you You've fallen to normality Fallen to reality But you can soar Oh you can soar Chorus Outro: When I'm burning I smell our love When I'm waking I see our love Halo's and I'm reminded Of how I held you How you held me How I was happy It'll never be the same Just a few notes. This is my second song I've ever properly sat down and written, it's loosely about someone I know who I feel is being shackled to a normality that isn't her by her friends and family. I'd love to hear some feedback, maybe what to improve on, what goes, what doesn't. Cheers. |
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