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Old 01-16-2013, 06:51 PM   #1
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Smile "For A While"- Original Song

I was inspired by a recent heartache in my life.
So I wrote this.
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"For A While"

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Old 01-17-2013, 09:08 PM   #2
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Nice and mellow, kinda like the chorusy intro.

0:39 - Like the weird vocal stylings

1:10 - Cops came by to stop my suicide attempt!

1:40 - My dog began to sob. I like the vocal stylings here

I can hear a base line in my head - would fill it out.

The vocals hold my attention, but the angsty lyrics are a little tough to swallow.

Keep on writing and recording!

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Muchos gracias, muchachos modernos!
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Old 01-18-2013, 12:03 AM   #3
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Sorry about the heartache. Sometimes writing these sort of songs can be cathartic. Vibrato on the vocals is pretty intense, though it fits the mood, I suppose. Guitar sounds pretty good. Wish there wasn't the background noise, but not a big deal. Sad songs are not typically my favorites, though it's pretty good for that type of song. Please review my music at this link:

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