Go Back   UG Community @ Ultimate-Guitar.Com > UG Community > The Pit
User Name  
Password
Search:

Reply
Old 01-20-2013, 02:56 AM   #1
mktrevor
Tearing down stoplights.
 
mktrevor's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Muskegon, Michigan
Lightbulb Electronic Song Critique

Hi Pit!

I've been experimenting with electronic music for awhile, mostly using FL Studio. I just finished a new song, and it would be incredibly helpful to get some feedback on it. Please let me know what you think I'm doing wrong and what (if anything) you think I'm doing right! Thanks!

Song is here: https://soundcloud.com/2xtoro/translation

-Trevor
__________________
Smith and Weston Jr. was a son of a gun,
He pressed his nose up to my head,
I was sweating bullets but I dodged the one
That was not as much sweat as was lead.
mktrevor is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 02:57 AM   #2
willT08
Rap Game Joan Fontaine
 
willT08's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: waiting for milk
Search 'UG Electronic Label' in the searchbar and take it there
__________________
Rim, don't RIM
willT08 is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 02:58 AM   #3
Saint78
julian wells
 
Saint78's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2009
Location: feels like i only go backwards
Ain't nobody fresher than my mah****in clique
__________________
you're a stone fox
Saint78 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 03:00 AM   #4
mktrevor
Tearing down stoplights.
 
mktrevor's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Muskegon, Michigan
Thanks willT08, I wasn't aware that there was a thread for this!
__________________
Smith and Weston Jr. was a son of a gun,
He pressed his nose up to my head,
I was sweating bullets but I dodged the one
That was not as much sweat as was lead.
mktrevor is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 03:00 AM   #5
Avedas
UG's Half Asian
 
Avedas's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Vancouver, BC
not dnb or trance cyal8r
Avedas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 03:04 AM   #6
willT08
Rap Game Joan Fontaine
 
willT08's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: waiting for milk
Quote:
Originally Posted by mktrevor
Thanks willT08, I wasn't aware that there was a thread for this!

No problem dude. There's a nice little group of us who make all kinds of EDM and we're all fairly knowledgeable
__________________
Rim, don't RIM
willT08 is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 05:45 AM   #7
TheFly_1990
UG's Bearded Avenger
 
TheFly_1990's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: UK
Just followed you on SoundCloud mate

Digging it
__________________

Gibson Buckethead Les Paul & Peter Frampton Les Paul
Dean Razorback Slime Bumblebee
Mesa Boogie Dual Rectifier
EHX Memory Man/Hazarai
Digitch Whammy
Sovtek Straight 4x12
Herdim Picks
Laney Linebacker 50 Reverb
MXR Phase 90
TheFly_1990 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 09:08 AM   #8
roaraudio
Registered User
 
Join Date: Dec 2012
fruit loop so gay
roaraudio is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 09:31 AM   #9
a_7_x
x'; DROP TABLE *; --
 
a_7_x's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Glasgow.
You tell 'em roar!!!
__________________


"And it's the thrill of life that enables us to flow"
a_7_x is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 11:21 AM   #10
strait jacket
cuntcuntcuntcuntcuntcunt
 
strait jacket's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: nowhere in particular
Quote:
Originally Posted by roaraudio
fruit loop so gay

you come up as a 13er now for me wtf?
OT:not my thing but pretty good for what it is IMO
strait jacket is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 11:56 AM   #11
Ometh
nobody
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Loving the salsa drums at 1:33 and the synth breakdown at 2:04. Don't really like the interlude at 4:16, and whats up with the static noise from 4:14 to 58:36? Anyway, great post techical brutal djenttrancethrashwoobwoob
Ometh is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-20-2013, 11:58 AM   #12
stratkat
IWTCIRD
 
stratkat's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Illinois
It's a good start, keep at it TS. I also use FL studio:]

Use more paramic EQ, and your kicks are too distorted, once you get you mixes cleaner you can work on making your compositions fuller.
__________________
E-married to EuBoat
FireFromTheVoid's Master;3

animelist
stratkat is online now   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:04 PM.

Forum Archives / About / Terms of Use / Advertise / Contact / Ultimate-Guitar.Com © 2014
Powered by: vBulletin Version 3.0.9
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.