01-20-2013, 02:56 AM
|
#1 |
|
Tearing down stoplights.
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Muskegon, Michigan
|
Electronic Song Critique
Hi Pit!
I've been experimenting with electronic music for awhile, mostly using FL Studio. I just finished a new song, and it would be incredibly helpful to get some feedback on it. Please let me know what you think I'm doing wrong and what (if anything) you think I'm doing right! Thanks!  Song is here: https://soundcloud.com/2xtoro/translation -Trevor
__________________
Smith and Weston Jr. was a son of a gun, He pressed his nose up to my head, I was sweating bullets but I dodged the one That was not as much sweat as was lead. |
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 02:58 AM
|
#3 | |
|
hail yeezus
Join Date: May 2009
Location: walking into a sign
|
Ain't nobody fresher than my mah****in clique
__________________
Quote:
|
|
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 03:00 AM
|
#4 |
|
Tearing down stoplights.
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Muskegon, Michigan
|
Thanks willT08, I wasn't aware that there was a thread for this!
__________________
Smith and Weston Jr. was a son of a gun, He pressed his nose up to my head, I was sweating bullets but I dodged the one That was not as much sweat as was lead. |
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 03:00 AM
|
#5 |
|
UG's Half Asian
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Vancouver, BC
|
not dnb or trance cyal8r
|
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 03:04 AM
|
#6 | |
|
UG's Jewish Seinfeld
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Coventry/Hertford, EDMland
|
Quote:
No problem dude. There's a nice little group of us who make all kinds of EDM and we're all fairly knowledgeable  |
|
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 05:45 AM
|
#7 |
|
UG's Bearded Avenger
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: UK
|
Just followed you on SoundCloud mate
Digging it
__________________
Gibson Buckethead Les Paul & Peter Frampton Les Paul Dean Razorback Slime Bumblebee Mesa Boogie Dual Rectifier EHX Memory Man/Hazarai Digitch Whammy Sovtek Straight 4x12 Herdim Picks Laney Linebacker 50 Reverb MXR Phase 90 |
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 09:08 AM
|
#8 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2012
|
fruit loop so gay
|
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 09:31 AM
|
#9 |
|
x'; DROP TABLE *; --
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Glasgow.
|
You tell 'em roar!!!
|
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 11:21 AM
|
#10 | |
|
yo
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: nowhere in particular
|
Quote:
you come up as a 13er now for me wtf? OT:not my thing but pretty good for what it is IMO |
|
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 11:56 AM
|
#11 | |
|
UG Freak
Join Date: Oct 2009
|
Loving the salsa drums at 1:33 and the synth breakdown at 2:04. Don't really like the interlude at 4:16, and whats up with the static noise from 4:14 to 58:36? Anyway, great post techical brutal djenttrancethrashwoobwoob
__________________
Quote:
|
|
|
|
|
|
01-20-2013, 11:58 AM
|
#12 |
|
UG's hottest crossdresser
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: US, Illinois
|
It's a good start, keep at it TS. I also use FL studio:]
Use more paramic EQ, and your kicks are too distorted, once you get you mixes cleaner you can work on making your compositions fuller.
__________________
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
| Thread Tools | Rate This Thread | |
|
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:35 PM.