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Old 01-21-2013, 05:03 PM   #1
Jabbe
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Three Flights by Jabbmeister

I'd like to hear what you have to say about my new song http://soundcloud.com/jabbmeister/t...lights-original

Just bought the keyboard two days ago, and I've been working on this today. Constructive critism please! Also follow me if you want more of this =)

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Old 01-21-2013, 05:48 PM   #2
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At first I was kinda thinking "Oh jeez - seven minutes of this?" But then the damn thing started to grow on me.

I like the cellowy sounds about a quarter of the way and the harmonies.

Then Dylan showed up with his harmonica which I liked -

Good voice.

One thing from a crit standpoint, the track has the sound of the room a little more than I like. If it was a little cleaner from that standpoint, it would agree more with my tastes.

Great effort none the less-

Keep up the good work!

If you are old enough to listen to naughty words, my stuff is at -

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1583381

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Muchos gracias, muchachos modernos!
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Old 01-22-2013, 11:29 PM   #3
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I have to agree with DWS about the sound of the room, but only in the beginning. However as the song progresses, that seems to become less of an issue. It's beautiful, man.

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