01-25-2013, 10:49 AM
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Join Date: May 2009
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Tapping, hammer-on's and pull-offs [GP5]
Just the start of something. I'm mostly curious if you think D works?
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01-25-2013, 10:56 AM
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UG Freak
Join Date: Oct 2009
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My D works for u bb
 I dig it tbh. Quite simple, yet nice and melodic.
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01-25-2013, 10:57 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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**** me, that was groovy as ****. I wasn't fond of the riff at bar 24 but you should defiantly expand on this.
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01-25-2013, 12:33 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2007
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That was great! But the last part from 24 on sounds like it needs to be in a different song. Unless you some really smooth awesome transition for that.
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01-25-2013, 12:59 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
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Sounds like Cyclamen, not bad actually. Not sure what the point of the break at bar 19 is, but its a good peice overall. Has big potential for epic proggyness.
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01-25-2013, 07:12 PM
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Join Date: May 2010
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I like it
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02-07-2013, 11:05 PM
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Iconoclast
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Brisbane, AU
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Thats awesome.
I threw it down 7 semitones and it still sounds awesome. |
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02-08-2013, 01:58 AM
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UG's derby Spike
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Israel
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You should definitely work on this piece some more, it has a lot of potential.
Reminds me of Yes but with tapping.
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02-08-2013, 08:53 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2009
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Cool, keep doing this!
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03-06-2013, 05:41 PM
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Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2010
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dude, definitely sweet. i would love to hear more on this! you have a good sense of harmony but also dynamic and odd phrasing, that's cool.
i can actually relate to your style a lot i feel, i really respect your writing. check out my latest mess of ideas if you have a minute: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1591476 |
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03-06-2013, 06:56 PM
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Slapper of the bass
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Iraq, California
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haha mind**** love it
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03-06-2013, 09:28 PM
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UG Freak
Join Date: Oct 2009
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I want to give this a proper crit, but it's so short god damnet. Post a full song already.
I can always give it a try tho. The drums are groovvy, but they could do with a bit more fills. The piano burst seems a bit sudden and I'm not shure I like it. Like frankibo said already, the change from 4/4 to triplet feel is pretty sweet. I'm not really shure what to think of 18-21 since it feels so empty compared to the previous section, but then again this is a WIP and I'm shure you'll come up with a proper transition and next riff. The second tap lick is also pretty sweet, dig the odd time sigs. Pretty good ideas that you can easily flesh out into a good full song with some work, all you need is to get started: 8/10. I'm not shure if you like electronic music at all, but hope you don't mind looking up one of the pieces I posted recently, or the two of them if you are feeling generous. Here are the links: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1591302 and http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1591449
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