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Old 01-26-2013, 09:35 PM   #1
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Work my self to death
Breathe my last breath
I know
How you can have heart
attacks in the snow
I've got to maintain
The shame ain't me
Pride I'd hide
Deep inside me
And in every breath that I breathe

Mister modest honest don't give two shits
I'm the one you need and the one that's fit
It's like I'm here so hear me clearly
What the **** do you want from me?
The one I love
Is in my heart
I carry it
Where ever I go
Originally Posted by laid-to-waste
look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.

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Old 01-26-2013, 11:51 PM   #2
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I don't like it. Most of the lines are seem too disjointed.
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